So, I was thinking of something like this?  Other than the eyes it’s almost literally exactly the same as before, actually.

Anyway, here’s all the sketches from last night and today of me trying to figure out how this even works.  Other than the giant colored Hinawa, the sketch pages are in the order that I drew them.

They really are just not-insane IKF eyes, wow.  But I do really like these kinds of eyes.

…And if nothing else, at least that one doodle of Ceese Linley looks good in this style.